Hi all-
Here is the updated and formatted rulebook for version 0.5 of my Blades in the Brokenlands high / heroic fantasy hack. I don’t have the playbooks revised yet. I hope to have the character playbooks and one GM chronicle book completed by the end of the week.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1IFwGwkdkTnruXCGDCy6c9evSAMFY0Jf6
Wow! It looks great! Still reading it.
Typo at Courage, Shame and Ego p.7
When a character spends their last point of Courage, they flee (or attempt to hide from) the immediate encounter and gaine one level of Shame.
The picture on the right side on p.13 cuts off some of the text.
If Rep Level is zero, roll two dice and keep the lowest result.
Level looks like a typo because I can’t see the l at the end.
The picture on the left side of p.14 cuts off some of the chart.
Maybe I just sleepy, but under Recovery on p.16, I think this is incorrect Grammer.
You might visit a healer who can stitch your wounds and soothe your mind a witch who
specializes in healing charms and restorative alchemy.
Maybe place an or between mind and a witch.
Typo? On p.17 under Overindulgence
If your ego roll clears more stress levels than you had marked,
I think this should be Courage.
Grammer? p.17 under Tapped.
(Can only taken in a city).
Maybe
(Can only take in a city).
Or
(Can only be taken in a city).
Toimu awesome! Thank you for the edits!