Some character sheets from last weeks “Into the Dark Lands”. Its the oldschool set up of Fighter, Mage, Rogue and Cleric in a FitD minimal version. It fits a standard CCG card format in 63×88 mm and comes in handy. Each player got a deck of cards to hold items, contacts, lcoations, project clocks, lingering danger clocks, Quests and Creature Compendium Entries.
#IntoTheDarkLands #ForgedInTheDark
Looks very cool!
I always found it boring to have special abilities giving +1D or +1E/Potency. So now its just training that everyone can do, right position next to Action Dots. And so the Special Abilities could be really special or in case of the Warrior haven even a 4th Effect Damage was possible (one of few exceptions to no +1D/E Abilities)
I am always fascinated by the flexibility of the system. Also with the slickness of your character sheets!
Ah, yes. I love the system. I created a total of 26 Hacks. From which I only showed somewhat half of them online 😀
Vandel J. Arden I would certainly pay for a compilation of your works. Your examples are very inspiring!
Uwwwww. I am slow as hell. Haven’t even completed Stras‘ Map yet. But soon. Also Chaosium is waiting for a pile of stuff too.
Most of my hacks are ONLY my sheets. Explained while I game them.
Oh, welll hummmm and haven’t even started on the new Blades Map in copperplate Style yet. And Black Space. And Damnation of the Judgement Kings. And Westward Chronicles, and Arkham Chronicles. And. and and emmmmmm….
Victor Diaz check out my ASHRPG collection in my profile. That’s where most is posted.
Jezzzzz. I missed being around on G+
Okay those are amazing and I’m super jealous… 😅
Dylan Green Character sheets are the only stuff I actually finish 😀
I do character sheets as a relaxing activity. Like right now in the bathtub 😀 https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/TvqWmW6re2-cshS9VfoXT0WpqQw4BJMZNQEiKk0JnyjK6A0sYLuGX6gCxlP6mUZld_JoqQ1k_JPwibEJjsDHUzFmjr5rQSYHpxY8=s0
Even as a native German, I tend to think & design games in english. My players regularly complain that I never do German sheets 😀
Love it, so streamlined. Not to be that guy tho, a handful of typos if you’re editing,
Sure, let me know the typos
Seeker – divine touch with an I, chosen ones lose the extra O, sacred quest D not T. Rogue – assassin, double S. Not trying to be a jerk, just a little polish I can add. I love the look of this, I’d love to see it in a nice little pdf
That’s helpful. I am no native speaker
No worries dude, it looks great, you’re like 96% spot on
Cool, would you mind if I ask for you to read over other stuff I got?
Vandel J. Arden I’d love to. It might be easier to email me at verbs.adjectives@gmail.com depending on size and number of corrections, but if you want it up on plus here for others to see, just post it and tag me, I’m happy to help. Like what are we looking at?
No idea yet, I need to fabricated some gibberish first, than make it readable 😀 Was just asking in case I ever get productive.
Greg Barnsdale how is this?
https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/Db6b9Fpg-dIqkIVnTIBE849400G6sxBSi7hK7JEgdrenyuumDFG-0t2ujx3uj-kLb7jr4zuTbIj6kV4V3bQL-gEQZYMsQb9UQGYH=s0
First paragraph – reMNants. Last line of first paragraph – these scorched lands, or this scorched land – your call, both work
2nd paragraph – comrades with an O not an A. 2nd last line, I would drop the from unspeakable forces. Tightens it up a bit
This format may be a little weird for longer form corrections, bear with me and ask questions if my responses seem off. But we’ll get through it
2nd paragraph after Introduction. Controls single L just before Non Player.
The next bit is a bit patchy, I dont want to put words on your page but the passage flows abit funny. I would suggest the following – “… controls the Non-Player Characters, a difficult but rewarding job. It calls for someone with imagination, who enjoys improvisation and helping others have fun. The GM directs the story … and present*s* challenges to the PCs. The GM will also make rulings …”
The third paragraph in that section is fine
Sorry, one bit, “players tell … their PCs”, add the S
After A World in Ruin – horrifying not horrorfying. Last line – they will act and follow their plans while offscreen, cut the comma and ‘they are’
I’ll start the second column shortly, once you’ve read what we’ve got and asked any questions and so on
Hi Greg, I will write you an invite to my publishing G+ group so we and other helpers can have a look at it without spamming the others with comment. Overall, is the writing style ok? I will put your corrections into the text. But most likely when I am back from GenCon
Sure thing. Yeah I’m aiming at clear and obvious mistakes or corrections, I’m not here to tell your style or flow is or isnt right. Mostly I’m good with it, it does what it should. Yeah, send me that invite whenever, I’ll help
How did you determine action rolls? How did you determine resistance rolls? Asking for a friend…
Dylan Green do you want the final sheets? The rolling is simple. attribute + D if marked as training or/and + Ability if there.
Sure if you’re willing to share.
Sure if you’re willing to share.
Andrew Shields